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The charts above show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the information show

The charts above show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the information show
The bar chart illustrates the number of
Japanese
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 tourists travelling internationally from 1985 to 1995. Meanwhile, the line graph depicts
Australia
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's proportion of
Japanese
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 tourists.
Overall
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, the bar chart shows a growing interest in travel among
Japanese
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 citizens. Notably, 1985 recorded the lowest number of
Japans
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Japan's
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 population
whereas
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 1995 showed the highest figure.
In contrast
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, the line graph shows that
Australia
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 had a significant influx of travellers from 1985 until 1988 when numbers began to decline for a year. Over time, overseas travel became more widespread for
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japanese
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Japanese
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 travellers.
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Initially
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 almost 5 million were travelling abroad, gradually increasing to nearly 11 million by 1990. In the following years, numbers began to fluctuate until 1994 when figures began to rise, reaching
its
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their
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 peak in 1995 at approximately 15 million.
On the other hand
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,
Australia
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 experienced a surge of
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japanese
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Japanese
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 tourists from 1985 to 1988, recording almost 5% of
travels
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travellers
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 choosing
Australia
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. From 1988 to 1989, the proportion declined to nearly 4%.
Conversely
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,
Australia
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 once again became a popular destination as shown by the steady increase in the number of visitors travelling from 1989 to 1993, registering roughly 6% in 1993. In summary, international holidays became a popular trend for Japans citizens
while
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Australia
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 was recognised as a popular destination.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words japanese, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • tourists
  • travel
  • abroad
  • number
  • increase
  • year
  • country
  • popularity
  • market
  • share
  • Japan
  • Australia
  • significant
  • factors
  • income
  • options
  • global
  • trend
  • consistent
  • role
  • visitors
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