Your friend has a travel company and would like you to come and work with him. Write a letter replying to your friend's offer. In your letter: explain what you know about your friend's company choose whether you accept or decline the offer give reasons for your choice You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..................,

Dear Sam , I hope

this

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letter finds you in excellent health and great spirits. I am writing

this

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letter to express my utmost gratitude that you

offer

Wrong verb form

offered

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me a job in your esteemed company. I know that your travel company is very popular among the local residents . I want to know

that

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apply

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how many employees are working

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your premises .

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, let me know what types of trips are organized by your company.

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but not

the

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apply

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least, how your workers respond to the customer's queries. I am glad to inform you that I am going to accept your offer as you know I am a student and

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looking for

a part-time work

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part-time work

a part-time job

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. I am available only on weekends from 9am to 10pm

hence

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, I can embark from next week. I really appreciate that you consider me for

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job which will solve my financial crisis. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours lovely, Harvi

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Try to give clearer information about the company, like its services or reputation.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure each paragraph has one main idea to improve clarity.

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You could use more friendly language in your closing sentence.

greeting and closing

You have a warm greeting and closing which is nice.

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You clearly express your willingness to take the job.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

162 words

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