Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
It is believed by some that testing products on animals is cruel and unfair,
while
others find it necessary for revolutionary innovations. There are a lot of companies that still are in the habit of using animals for their items, but it is extremely devastating and there is no way it can be looked at positively.
Linking Words
To begin
with, nature is the most beautiful thing. The trees and the wildlife deserve as much love as human beings. If human beings have a say in what they want to do with their bodies and appearance, other mammals should not be treated unjustly just because they can not speak their mind freely. Linking Words
For instance
, if a lab rat could talk it would never ask to be used for scientific research. They should not be killed or given any kind of pain for a product to break through.
Linking Words
In addition
, we live in a world where technology is so advanced that we can make robots for our research. Assuming an important discovery in skincare is created and needs to be tested, a human-like robot can be used to mimic the actions and reactions of a real individual. Linking Words
Moreover
, consensual people Linking Words
also
want to participate in research and innovations where they are rewarded with incentives. Linking Words
For example
, a lot of programs exist where one can make money by participating in a development project. Linking Words
This
can not only build a positive outlook on the brand but Linking Words
also
help the people who are in dire need of a side income.
Linking Words
To sum up
, all living beings should be seen as the same and experiments should only be done on mankind if they wish to participate.Linking Words
Submitted by samihareza14 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Task Response
Ensure a balanced discussion of both views presented in the question before summarizing your own opinion. This would strengthen your argument and task response.
Coherence and Cohesion
Work on developing clearer paragraphing and transitions between ideas to enhance readability and coherence.
Language
Incorporate a wider range of complex sentence structures and vocabulary to demonstrate linguistic capability, especially if aiming for a higher band.
Task Achievement
Consider including more detailed examples and evidence to support your arguments, this could make your essay more persuasive and comprehensive.
Task Response
Provided a clear stance throughout the essay, demonstrating strong task engagement.
Coherence and Cohesion
Made good use of an introduction and a conclusion to frame the essay, aiding in clarity and coherence.
Task Achievement
Included relevant examples from technology and societal practices, enriching the content and argumentative depth.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?