The graph and chart give information on the aveage daily maximum and minimum temperature in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities

The graph and chart give information on the aveage daily maximum and minimum temperature in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph and chart give information on the aveage daily maximum and minimum temperature in degrees Celsius and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities
The given graph and chart illustrate information about the average daily highest and lowest temperature and the
amount
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number
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of days with rainfall in two Australian cities.
Overall
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, Australian towns are divided into
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Brisband
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Brisbane
and
Canberra
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. It is remarkable that the peak point of weather for both
locate
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is located
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in February,
while
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the coldest season is in June and July.
However
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, the minimum temperature of these locations has a huge wide gap in degrees Celsius, with
Canberra
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being colder than
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Brisband
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Brisbane
by almost 10. To describe more about the rainfall, in the first quarter of the year,
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Brisband
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Brisbane
has
the
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apply
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number
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numbered
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more than half of
Canberra
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,
whereas
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next quarter,
Canberra
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has just stepped up to have more in June by 3 days.
In
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third,
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Canberra
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still has a
little
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small
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amount of rainfall that
over
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to
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other places. In the final part, the number of days is increased over the month for
Brisband
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and dominates
Brisband
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in November and December.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words brisband, canberra with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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