the maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now and plans for its development

the maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now and plans for its development
IELTS Writing Task Chart for the maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now and plans for its development
The aforementioned maps illustrate the significant changes of a town called "Islip" in two time periods: from 2005, when it first opened, to 2010.
Overall
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, many new facilities were introduced.
Furthermore
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, the size of the amenities increased. In 2005, to the north of the town, there was countryside, where shops were located below and across the main road. To the east, there was a park,
whereas
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housing was placed in the middle and to the south of the town.
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, to the southwest, a school was constructed. More importantly, the main road was connected to other roads that led to the park and the school. Turning to the 2010 map, the shops that were placed below the countryside were replaced with a bus station, a shopping centre, a car parking spot , and new housing.
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, the main roads that are now constructed around the Islip are called "Dual carriageway",
while
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the area in between is for Pedestrians only. The number of housing units
also
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surged, but the size of the park decreased.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Small town
  • Centre
  • Development
  • Maps
  • Plans
  • Introduce
  • Topic
  • Purpose
  • Essay
  • Description
  • Current
  • Key features
  • Facilities
  • Advantages
  • Positive aspects
  • Benefits
  • Proposed
  • Changes
  • Improvements
  • Suggested
  • Potential
  • Course of action
  • Summarize
  • Opinion
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