In recent years, the issue of more manufacturing
products
containing high levels of Use synonyms
sugar
, Use synonyms
Correct word choice
as which
which
causes many health problems. If sugary Correct pronoun usage
it
products
should be made more expensive to encourage Use synonyms
people
to consume less Use synonyms
sugar
, it has sparked heated debate. From my perspective, I completely disagree with making sugary Use synonyms
products
more expensive to encourage Use synonyms
people
to consume less Use synonyms
sugar
.
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To begin
with, one of the main reasons why I agree is that making sugary Linking Words
products
expensive can’t completely make Use synonyms
people
consume less Use synonyms
sugar
. Use synonyms
This
is because a lot of Linking Words
people
who eat high-Use synonyms
sugar
foods develop a dependence on sugary Use synonyms
products
, so that they will choose other ways Use synonyms
to
Verb problem
apply
instead
. Linking Words
For instance
, those smokers would not stop smoking Linking Words
Linking Words
although
the sentence Smoking is harmful to health is on Punctuation problem
, although
cigarette
package. Correct article usage
the cigarette
As a result
, a rise in price would not affect Linking Words
individuals
who are addicted to sugaryUse synonyms
, so
it can’t completely make Check wording
foods, so
people
consume less Use synonyms
sugar
.
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Furthermore
, another compelling argument in Linking Words
favor
of Use the right word
favour
this
view is that it is unfair to low-income Linking Words
individuals
. Indeed, it will enhance the living Use synonyms
cost
of low-income Fix the agreement mistake
costs
individuals
and have no influence on rich Use synonyms
people
. It is because Use synonyms
Consuming
Fix capitalization
consuming
sugar
is the Use synonyms
basic
of diet, and it is Replace the word
basis
also
a Linking Words
main
cost of living spending of low-income Correct word choice
major
people
. When the price of sugary Use synonyms
products
rises, the Use synonyms
life
costs of their area should be reduced to ensure their Replace the word
living
life
Correct word choice
normal life
normally
, Rephrase
apply
subsequently
resulting in other physical problems. For Linking Words
those
Correct determiner usage
the
rich
they had more money Add a comma
rich,
so
it would be more chances to avoid Punctuation problem
, so
this
situation. Linking Words
Such
Linking Words
a
approach would only affect low-income Correct article usage
an
individuals
and Use synonyms
no
influence on wealthy Verb problem
have no
people
, even if it Use synonyms
will
Wrong verb form
would
cost
the physical problem Verb problem
alleviate
to
low-income Change preposition
for
people
.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that I disagree with making sugary Use synonyms
products
more expensive to encourage Use synonyms
people
to consume less Use synonyms
sugar
. Only by reducing intake Use synonyms
high-
Change preposition
of high-sugar
sugar
Use synonyms
products
can we consume less Use synonyms
sugar
and reduce health problems.Use synonyms