You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level.

Dear Mr.Jack, Today, one of my friends shared the brochure for the walking tour in the Alps mountains, and I was elated to see that the length of the trip will be one week.

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, I could not find a few details that I was looking for. So, I have decided to write a letter requesting you to share those details.

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, I have two health concerns for which I am expecting some suggestions from you. Since my childhood, hiking in the mountains has been something I am very much passionate about, and I would like to be a part of

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amazing journey.

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, I would like to know the travel starting date to purchase all the essentials in beforehand for

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trip.

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, if you could please provide me with a detailed breakdown of the expenses for the whole week, that would be amazing.

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, I have two important concerns , which are making me hesitant to join the trip.

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, I am overweighed, and it is affecting my blood pressure level. Another concern is that I am having a breathing issue. So, if I travel or walk in a place where the oxygen level is low, it will be very suffocating for me.

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, it would be very helpful if you could provide me with some suggestions to handle these health conditions. I am eagerly looking forward to your response once you receive the letter. Yours sincerely, Pratheep

pratheep309

Jul 15, 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Try to break your ideas into more clear sections, to make your points more clear.

task achievement

Make sure to clearly label your questions to the tour operator as separate points.

task achievement

Your interest in hiking and the specific questions you have show a good understanding of the topic.

coherence and cohesion

The letter has a nice greeting and closing, which is friendly and polite.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

241 words

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