Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter - introduce yourself - explain what is wrong with the furniture - say what action you would like the landlord to take.

Dear Mr. Salamanca. My name is Tomás Alcaide, and I am a resident of apartment 455 in the apartment complex located at Alcalde Monckeberg Avenue. The reason for

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letter is to complain about the furniture in the residence. To be more specific, I am referring to the kitchen's table surface

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unstable and

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, insecure to use, which was not fixed as it was requested by my wife before we moved into the place. As you can imagine,

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is an issue because my spouse has to use the dining room's table to prepare the food and afterwards take it to the kitchen to cook it, which is extremely uncomfortable.

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, I would appreciate, if you could send one of your workers to repair or replace

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damaged table next week.

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, we will contact a specialist on our own and send you the bill once the job is finished. Looking forward to having a satisfactory response from you. Yours sincerely. Tomás Alcaide.

tom.alcaidesa

Jul 17, 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure to clearly state the specific furniture problem in a separate paragraph to improve clarity.

coherence and cohesion

Consider using simple sentences to express your ideas more directly and clearly.

tone

The letter has a polite tone, which is suitable for a landlord-tenant communication.

task achievement

The introduction effectively presents your identity and purpose for writing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

165 words

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