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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a areport for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a areport for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line chart gives data on the comparison of
wheat
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exports
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 in
Australia
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, Canada, and the European Community over a
5 year
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 period between 1985 and 1990.
Overall
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, it can be seen from the graph that the number of
wheat
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exports
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 in Canada showed significant fluctuation. Another noticeable observation is that the European Community's
exports
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 surged gradually,
while
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Australia
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's
exports
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 sank slightly over the period
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. In Canada, the amount of
wheat
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exports
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 plummeted slowly from approximately 20
millions
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million
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 to 15
millions
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million
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 in the first year. During the period from 1986 to 1988, the
wheat
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exports
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winessed
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witnessed
 a substantial growth by around 10
million
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 tons. There was a considerable decline in
wheat
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exports
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 from 25
million
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 to over 15
million
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 in the following years;
however
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, it recovered rapidly again in 1990. Between 1985 and 1986, the
exports
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 of
wheat
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 in
Australia
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 rose slightly. After that,
Australia
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's
exports
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 increased moderately by around 5
million
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 tonnes from 1986 to 1990. Regarding the number of
wheat
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exports
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 in the European community, it fell by about 4
million
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 in 1986, and rocketed steadily in 1990.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words wheat, exports, australia, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • wheat exports
  • trend
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • fluctuations
  • periods of stability
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • similarities
  • differences
  • key points
  • potential reasons
  • climatic conditions
  • agricultural policies
  • market demand
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