Write a letter to your frind who lives in aqnother country and in your letter: a. Invite him to a public event in your country b. Describe the public event. c. Explain about other plans you have for your friennd when he will visit.

Hey Harjit, It's been a

while

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! I hope you're doing great. I am writing

this

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letter to invite you to a traditional festival-Diwali, which is

also

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know

Wrong verb form

known

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festival

Correct article usage

the festival

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of light

Punctuation problem

, on

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2nd October 2025 in my country. Diwali holds a deep

spritual

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spiritual

and cultural significance in Sikhism.

Although

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India is a diverse country with several religions,

this

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festival is

celberated

Correct your spelling

celebrated

by the whole nation together. People start preparing for Diwali prior to a month

Rephrase

prior.

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The houses are thoroughly cleaned and decorated with bright lights and

earth shape

Use the right word

earth-shaped

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lamps. At night time people burn crackers, and exchange sweets and

gift

Fix the agreement mistake

gifts

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with each other.

Moreover

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, on

this

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day my whole family wear traditional clothes and

worship

Correct subject-verb agreement

worships

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Change preposition

apply

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God. I'll make all the arrangements for you during your stay at my home. Guess what! I have already decided

ethic

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ethical

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dress for you to wear

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this

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event. My family and friends are excited to meet you.

Verb problem

I'm

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looking

Rephrase

forward to

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see

Wrong verb form

seeing

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you soon. Warm regards, Amar.

amarbatth367

Jul 30, 2025

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task achievement

Make sure to use correct spellings, like 'known' instead of 'know'.

coherence and cohesion

Try to use clearer paragraphs for each idea. For example, use one paragraph for the event and one for plans.

coherence and cohesion

Add a nice closing line to make your letter warmer.

task achievement

The letter has a strong invitation that will make your friend feel welcomed.

task achievement

You included cultural details which make the event sound interesting.

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5
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

163 words

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