The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
The bar chart illustrates the number of US
families
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in five categories of yearly revenue and how the number changed from 2007 to 2015.
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, the total number of US households with annual
income
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of $50,000-$74,999 and $75,000-$99,999
kept
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remained
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small and fluctuated negligibly during the 8
years
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,
whereas
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families
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in other categories remained
a
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at a
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high quantity and changed obviously over the period of 8
years
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. From 2007 to 2015, the figure for US households with yearly
income
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of $50,000-$74,999
kept
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remained
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the lowest (about 15
million
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), the second lowest was
families
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with annual
income
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of $75,000-$99,999 (around 21
million
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), both
the
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two
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categories fluctuated slightly during the 8
years
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.
Families
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with an annual revenue of $100,000 or more held the biggest quantity in 2007 but dropped by approximately 3
million
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within 4
years
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and ultimately quickly climbed to 33
million
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at the end
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of 2015. Households with yearly
income
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less than $25,000 and $25,000-$49,999 experienced a similar change
,
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both
of
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them
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rose by about 4
million
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from 2007 to 2011 and decreased by around 2
million
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in the next 4
years
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words families, income, years, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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