It is argued that folks should pay more for health insurance when they get a disease
due to
their irresponsible lifestyles and less nutritious meals. In my opinion, Linking Words
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statement has both positive and negative aspects in about equal measure, with the two reasons: a lack of self-control and an uncontrollable Linking Words
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environment.
To start with, unorganised lifestyles and unhealthy meals are generally controllable, which means you can become healthier with a better quality of life if you always try to keep in mind that Use synonyms
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lifestyles and diets affect your body. Linking Words
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, a lack of self-regulation , Linking Words
such
as overeating, can directly have a negative impact on your body system, resulting in obesity and diabetes. Linking Words
For instance
, some statistics say that in 2020, 70% of the residents living in New York, in the U.S., had fast food ten times a week as their main meals.
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On the other hand
, some occupations with irregular Linking Words
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hours, Use synonyms
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as doctors and nurses, should be an exception Linking Words
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a poll conducted by the Japanese government in 2016 in Japan, two-thirds of medical practitioners in Shiga said that they got sick three times a month, Linking Words
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of their long workload.
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To sum up
, some people say that it is their responsibility to pay more money for health care when a disease starts to undermine their body. Even though there are pros and cons to Linking Words
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topic, I think that governments should allocate more funds to their residents.Linking Words