due to increasing density of living areas in a city,most residents are suffering from physical and social dangers.consequently, they are against living in the city. to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

The considerable number of people who are living in cities
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has caused
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physical and mental harm;
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, individuals
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to live in rural areas. I totally disagree with
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statement, because living in a
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a range of advantages as the presence of necessary needs,
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that it offers opportunities
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and safety in their life. Cities have the ability to provide essential needs, in
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contrast
with rural regions. Living in a town can guarantee
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easy access to food and
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necessities.
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, a recent study by The BBC shows that individuals who are living in a remote area struggle every day to get daily needs,
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to suitable education,
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to urban residents.
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, urban citizens have more opportunities in their
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than those who
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in a remote place. These opportunities include a job with good
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and a safe place to raise your kids.
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, a recent study by
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Nations found that people who
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in
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are exposed to
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than
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they have
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chances in life. In conclusion, I firmly disagree with the view of living in a remote area, since it doesn't offer the same features as
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urban
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. Town residents can get
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and other
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.
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, they have a strong system which provides safety and protection
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.

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planning
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grammar
Fix big grammar errors. Use cities not 'a cities'.
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strength
Clear view on the topic
structure
Simple order in parts
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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