With the increased global demand for oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

It is often argued that the world should open up untouched regions to meet the growing demand for oil and gas. I completely disagree with
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view, as
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exploration would cause severe environmental degradation and deepen global dependence on fossil fuels. Expanding exploration into previously unspoiled areas would inflict irreversible harm on the planet’s biodiversity. To obtain short-term
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supplies, vast ecosystems must be cleared, releasing harmful greenhouse gases and accelerating climate change.
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not only destroys habitats but
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threatens the survival of countless species.
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, extensive drilling in Central Asia between the 1970s and 1990s led to significant deforestation and air pollution, drastically reducing the populations of native flora and fauna.
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, the continuous pursuit of new fossil reserves fosters unsustainable consumption habits. When societies rely on discovering fresh oil and gas fields, they neglect investment in renewable alternatives
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as solar or wind
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. A recent report by the World Nature Conservancy warned that the global expansion of fossil-fuel extraction is increasing by nearly 9% annually, delaying progress toward clean
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innovation. In conclusion,
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demand is undeniably rising, exploiting untouched lands is a short-sighted solution. Governments should
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prioritise renewable
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development to safeguard the environment and reduce dependence on finite fossil resources.

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Add one or two clear counter ideas and then state your main view again so you answer the 'to what extent' part.
coherence
Link ideas with more clear bridges like 'this leads to' or 'as a result' to show cause and effect.
support
Give more than one real example or fact to back up your point.
stance
Clear stand against the idea.
organization
Good structure with a clear start, body and end.
flow
Reasoning is easy to follow and points are in a good order.

Word Count

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Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • global demand
  • finite resources
  • energy consumption
  • exploiting
  • untouched ecosystems
  • carbon emissions
  • climate change
  • renewable energy
  • sustainable energy solutions
  • geopolitical consequences
  • territorial disputes
  • dependency
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