The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The maps compare the layout of the Central Library two decades ago with its current form.
Overall
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, the library has undergone a major transformation, with new facilities added and old sections refurbished.
While
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the entrance remains in the same position, tables and chairs in the middle area have been removed, creating a wider central space. A new café has been opened in the space where
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desk once stood, located directly east of the entrance. A reading
room
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used to be located just west of the entrance, but it has now been converted into a computer
room
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. The new section for reference books is located adjacent to the computer
room
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, replacing the former adult fiction section. Meanwhile, the adult fiction section has been relocated to the opposite side, alongside a newly built information desk and self-service machines. A lecture
room
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is
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has
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now
introduced
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been introduced
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in the northeast corner, which previously contained children’s books. Meanwhile, the northwest corner has been transformed into a multifunction space with sofas and children’s bookshelves,
when
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where
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storytelling events are held.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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