The diagram shows the process of producing honey. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing honey by the bees.  

Overall

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, it can be seen from the diagram that

manufacturing

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the manufacturing

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process is complex and multi-stage, starting with

establishment

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the establishment

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of

hive

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the hive

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, and ending with the final product.  In detail,

according to

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what is shown,

the first step is

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the hive building by the colony of the bees. Afterwards, in

spring

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spring,

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they are flying to the flowers in their

pollunation

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pollination

time and getting the nectar of the

flower

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flowers

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which

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, which

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is the essential ingredient of honey.

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this

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, they are returning and filling the cells with stored

nectars

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nectar

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.   In terms of

further

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processing, they are all

placing

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placed

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in the cells and starting to provide cells with air

by

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with

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the help of their wings.

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, a hydro evaporation process is beginning. In the final stage, the farmers

are taking

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take

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the produced honey,

then

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storing

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store

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and

filling

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fill

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the jars.

This

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stage

marking

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marks

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the

completition

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completion

of the processing cycle.