The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.

The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.
The pie chart shows the advantages and
disadvantages
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elements in Bowen Islands.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the main
disadvantages
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of the
island
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are the high cost of living,
while
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a greater advantage is the local people. The least common
disadvantages
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based on the survey are weather and food quality
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by contrast
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, fewer advantages regarding participant responses are good accommodation and culture. In terms of
disadvantages
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, the high cost of living and entertainment consist for the largest proportion of the
island
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, 50%. The second most advantageous aspect of the
island
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is the scenery, with 35%.
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, visitors were not happy with the weather quality, as mentioned by 15%,
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food quality was relatively similar , 10% of Bowen
Island
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Regarding the advantages of the
Island
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, 42% of participants believe that local people are quiet and nature, followed by the scenery with 35%. Meanwhile, good accommodation represents 11%,
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culture accounted for 12%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words disadvantages, island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • The chart shows
  • Most common
  • a large share
  • a small share
  • the majority
  • many
  • some
  • few
  • nearly all
  • around
  • about
  • as a result
  • however
  • but
  • and
  • also
  • pros and cons
  • advantage
  • disadvantage
  • benefit
  • problem
  • positive side
  • negative side
  • easy
  • hard
  • cheap
  • expensive
  • cost
  • time
  • transport
  • shops
  • restaurants
  • nature
  • calm
  • safe
  • busy
  • crowded
  • weather
  • location
  • compare
  • more than
  • less than
  • first
  • second
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