The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries

The line graph illustrates the differences in clothing exports among three countries.

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, the chart displays the Colombia, Japan and Myanmar clothing exports in the years between 1999 and 2003 in millions of dollars from 0 to 1000. The Colombia, in 1999, above 400

million

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dollars worth of clothes were exported.

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, until the year 2002, it had been rising steadily to 700,

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, between 2002 and 2003, the exports dropped significantly to 610. Japan, in 1999, spent above 450

million

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dollars on attire .

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, the exported clothing wasn't stable till 2001, to 590, which had dropped steadily to below 500 in 2003. The Myanmar, in 1999, there were no attire exported. The next year , it had rocketed up to 800

million

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worth of clothes exported, and after that year, it increased significantly to 940million.

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, in 2002, it had plunged to 350. In 2003, it rose slightly to 420.

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