You live near a university and would like to earn some extra money by renting a room in your apartment to a student. Write a letter to the university housing office. In your letter, • introduce yourself • explain why your apartment would be a good living place for a student • describe the room you have for rent
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am living in a cottage near Boston University. I am the only one in
this
house because my parents went on holiday and they are to home next year. So I have decided to request you to inform students about my offer.
My house's facilities are it is a quiet area, the house has good quality Wi-Fi and we use the kitchen, bathroom, and living room together. And the home is near to the train station, if he wants to go somewhere it is easy for him. I don't ask him for much money, just enough for my daily needs.
In student's room has a laptop, a desk for studying, a shelf for clothes, a bed and his own toilet. I think these features are good for students.
Yours sincerely,
YusufbekSubmitted by saydusmonovasomiddin94 on
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task achievement
Begin your letter with a more personalized introduction that includes your full name and address to provide a clear context.
coherence and cohesion
Use paragraphs effectively to structure your letter, with each main point in its own paragraph (introduce yourself, explain why your apartment is suitable, and describe the room).
task achievement
End your letter with a warm closing statement and include a call to action or the next step you would like the reader to take.
task achievement
Maintain a formal and polite tone throughout the letter, appropriate for communication with a university office.
coherence and cohesion
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite