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Anyone can post information on the internet. Some people say most of what we read on the internet is inaccurate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Internet
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 plays an indispensable role in everyone's life. Now, it is common among
individuals
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 to post anything on social media platforms. Some people believe that the data on these
websites
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 is inaccurate, as it misleads them and invades their privacy. I agree with
this
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 notion. But still, there are some sites which provide authentic
information
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 to
individuals
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. One of the main reasons for my agreement is that the content of most
websites
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 is fake. It is hard for
individuals
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 to identify genuine
information
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 on the
internet
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 . The majority of
websites
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 have their purpose to misguide
individuals
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 by getting their personal
information
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. It is common to receive spam messages, calls, and emails on our phones, and they have the motive of stealing personal
information
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 . Hackers send links in messages
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such
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, such
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 as offering jobs or monetary rewards to them. If any person opens it unintentionally,
then
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 the hackers can easily gain access to their credit cards
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 or banking details.
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 , the growing materialistic mindset encourages
individuals
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 to trust misleading
websites
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 which promote wealth.
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 , mostly social media influencers promote the gaming apps
such
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 as Crown Clubs, just by clicking on the link, they can earn money as much as they can. How would it be possible to earn money only by playing games on
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internet
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the internet
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However
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 , there are some sites
whichprovide
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that provide
 authentic
information
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 to
individuals
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 , and they can easily trust it. They
use
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 a specific domain name in the link, where people can verify the authenticity of the website.
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, educational sites
use
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 .edu, organisations
use
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 .org, and the Canadian immigration news
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use
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 .ca at the
last
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 of the website link. In conclusion,
although
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 the
internet
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 offers authentic sources of
information
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, there is still a prevalence of misleading
websites
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 which may pose risks to an individual's privacy.
Therefore
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, people should remain cautious before clicking on any links.

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task
Give a clear view of how far you agree, and add more detail on why you hold this view.
coherence
Use one main idea per paragraph and link ideas with simple joining words.
language
Check grammar and spelling, and choose more correct phrases.
content
Add more real examples or facts that back up your points and relate them to the view.
structure
Begin with a short intro that states your view and end with a short conclusion.
stance
You state your view clearly.
content
There are some good examples and links to the points.
structure
Words like Moreover and However help flow.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • internet
  • information
  • true
  • false
  • source
  • author
  • date
  • check
  • facts
  • fact
  • post
  • read
  • news
  • easy
  • fast
  • bias
  • proof
  • evidence
  • reliable
  • trust
  • truth
  • think
  • share
  • question
  • learn
  • careful
  • example
  • clear
  • skill
  • site
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