The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005.

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The maps illustrate the changes
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Youngsville in New Zealand over a
25 year
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25-year
period between 1980 and 2005. Generally,
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see major changes. Most notably, green spaces and residential areas were completely removed to make way for new, modern infrastructure
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as a large stadium in the north and skyscrapers in the southeast
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the hospital, airport, and school remained intact. In 1980, the hospital was located north of River Alanah, surrounded by trees and a residential area. By 2005, the woodland in
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cut down and replaced by a park.
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, the hospital remained in its original location. In the northeast, the houses were replaced by a stadium by 2005. To the southeast, houses and trees were demolished and replaced by skyscrapers and a warehouse.
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the railway station remained on the eastern edge, a new marina was built along the nearby waterfront.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
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