The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005.

The maps illustrate how Youngsville in New Zealand changed over a 25-year period from 1980 to 2005. Generally,

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Youngsville in New Zealand witness a significant modernisation. Most

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noticeably, the increase in residential houses, the elimination of the Woodland, and the introduction of trees. In the East, all the tree areas were cut down and replaced by a Park. The entire residential area was replaced by a Stadium and a Park. There was a new Railway station along the residential

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, a new factory has been constructed next to the woodland. In the North, the trees and residential areas were replaced by factories. There was a new warehouse across from a factory. In the West, there were new skyscrapers along the railway station. A new Marina has been constructed next to the railway station. On the left side of the map, the trees have been cut down next to a factory.

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The maps show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 to 2005.

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers

Some people believe that software programming should be taught at primary school. Others think that the focus at this level should be on playing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Today,more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult,such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic.What are the benefits and disadvantages for people who visit such places?