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The two maps below show an island, befor and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The two maps give information about the
developing
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development
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 and
constructing
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construction
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 of some places for tourism on an island.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 in the past it used to be an empty island with some trees in it, but that changed after some improvements were
done
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made
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 to the place and
building
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buildings
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.
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, it is noticeable that the position of the plants has not been changed
on
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 the recent form.
According to
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 the data shown, the north west area is the beach zone; before, it was not suitable for swimming, and that changed. As for south-north, an entrance has been placed; it is called the pier, and near it are several ships,
while
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 it leads to the reception.
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, behind the front desk is a restaurant
that is
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 bigger in size, and surrounding these two, there are various cabin accommodations where tourists can stay to rest, and between these cottages, there are three palms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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