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the chart below shows the number of household in the US by their income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

The bar chart provides key information about the
number
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 of households in the United States by their income in three years: 2007, 2011 and 2015. The units are measured
number
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 of US households in millions, by annual income.
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, it is clear from the graph in 2007 that the highest
number
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 received 100.000$ or more, nearly 30
million
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 households,
whereas
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 the lowest
people
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 received 75.000$-99.999$, less than 15
million
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.
People
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 who reached 50.000$-74.999 represented 20
million
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. It is noticeable that individuals who received 25.000$-49.999$ and less than 25.000$ and 75.000$-99.999$, are still remain in the same
number
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.
According to
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 what is shown in 2011, it is apparent that
people
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 who received 75.000$-99.999$ still the lowest part, less than 15
million
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,
while
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 those who received 25.000$-49.999$ had the highest
number
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, reaching 30
million
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.
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,
people
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 who received 100.000$ or more are close to 30
million
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.
Also
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, it is evident that
people
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 who received 25.000$-49.999$ and less than 25.000$ and 75.000$-99.999$, are still remain in the same
number
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. In terms of 2015, a significant observation is that approximately 35
million
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 had increased in their income, reaching 100.000$ or more. There is no clear change in the rest of the category.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, million, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household income
  • income brackets
  • trend analysis
  • income distribution
  • economic policies
  • inflation
  • job market
  • notable shifts
  • overall trend
  • low-income households
  • middle-income households
  • high-income households
  • time periods
  • factors contributing
  • implications
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