The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compariosns where relevant.

The line chart illustrates the
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of
visitors
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to a particular Caribbean island, categorised by their type of accommodation, between 2010 and 2017.
Overall
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, the total
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of tourists increased throughout the period.
Visitors
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staying on cruise ships showed a consistent upward trend,
whereas
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those staying on the island experienced noticeable fluctuations. At the beginning of the period, the total
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of
visitors
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stood at 1
million
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.
This
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figure rose gradually to nearly 3
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by 2015 and
then
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levelled off in 2016, before increasing sharply in the final year. Turning to
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staying on cruise ships, the
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started at just under 0.5
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in 2010 and rose to 0.5
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one year later. It
then
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fell to approximately 0.25
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in 2012, after which it increased steadily, reaching 2
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by 2017.
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, the
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of tourists staying on the island was slightly above 0.5
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in 2010 and remained unchanged in 2011.
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figure
then
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climbed steadily to 1.5
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in 2013, where it plateaued for three years until 2015. After a slight decline to around 1.25
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in 2016, the
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recovered to 1.5
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at the end
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of the period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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