The diagrams below show the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy.

The two diagrams illustrate the four stages of a
Ladybug
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's
life
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cycle
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and the anatomy of its distinctive body parts.
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, a ladybird's
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cycle
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starts with the egg stage and finishes in
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the adults
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adults
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adult
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stage.
While
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a
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has eight anatomical parts, the Red Elytra is more noticeable because of its bright red colour. To the commencement of the
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cycle
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, Lady Bird's eggs lay on a leaf
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to 5 days, which is the shortest period of
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life
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span.
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the larva hatches for the longest time of three weeks.
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this
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, a
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enters into pupa stage, where it only eats leaves for 7 days. And
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, the development turns into an adult beetle and recommences the
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cycle
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. In terms of anatomical segments of a
ladybug
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, its head and abdomen are black in colour. The bright red part of a ladybird's body is called the Red Elytra, which has black many black dots. Underneath the Red Elytra, the thinnest body is located, which is the wing. A ladybird has two legs and two eyes,
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it
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has a pair of antennae and a pair of pronotum.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words ladybug, life, cycle with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • metamorphosis
  • pupal stage
  • larva
  • elytra (wing covers)
  • anatomy
  • compound eyes
  • antennae
  • egg stage
  • adult ladybird
  • hatch
  • voracious eaters
  • shedding skin
  • infested
  • habitat
  • protective features
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