The bar chart shows the average size class in primary schools and lower secondary schools in 6 countries compared to the world average in 2006.

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and lower secondary
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schools classes size
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school class sizes
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differed
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across 6 countries in 2006. By and large, the South Korean classes had the largest size in both
schools
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in the world, catching up to Japan.
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, Denmark and Iceland provided the smallest class sizes in 2006. Amid those up-and-downs, the UK and Mexico granted a balanced
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number
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of seats for students. Precisely, South Korea's primary and Japan's secondary
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had an equal number of students, recording 35. South Korea's lower secondary school possessed 5 people more than Japan's primary one.
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, there are 15 people
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who went to Mexico's primary school than in the UK in 2006.
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, Denmark and Iceland
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were able to provide around a bit more than 20 seats on average. Despite that, the whole world's class size comprised a solid 20 seats for primary school and about 25 for lower secondary one.

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