The chart below shows the price in Euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006

The provided chart illustrates the cost of 800
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frames
of four kinds of
bread
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(Wholegrain, Brown, White and Rye) in a European country between 2001 and 2006.
Overall
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, what stands out from the graph is that there were
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considerable
upward trends in the cost of
of
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both types of Brown and white breads,
whereas
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the kind of
bread
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, as regards Rye,
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slightly
climbed over the years. In
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contrast
, the graph shows that the Whole
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Grain
was the most expensive
bread
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in 2002.
in
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2001, White and Brown
bread
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started at 0.6$,
then
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the trends went up significantly till 2003. The Brown
bread
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had a
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fluctuation
over the next years until 2005, reaching
at
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1.6$,
where
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while
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White
bread
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from 2002 to 2005 had steadily
rose
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to around
over
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1.2$.
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, the Rye
started
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also started
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also
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0.6$ in 2001, but
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after that
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fluctuation over the two years. In 2003,
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remained stable at 0.6$. The figure
then
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gradually rose
almost
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to almost
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0.7 in 2005. If we look at whole grain, the trend rose sharply to a peak at 1.8$ in 2002. In 2015, a considerable
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occured
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occurred
as the cost
almost
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was almost
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0.7$.
Then
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rose again at the same point the it started at 8$ in 2005.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words bread with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Analyze
  • Price trend
  • Period
  • Increase / Decrease in price
  • Compare
  • Starting prices
  • Shift over time
  • Causes
  • Inflation
  • Cost of wheat
  • Consumer demand
  • Price volatility
  • Types of bread
  • Market trends
  • Economic conditions
  • Euros
  • 800 grams
  • European country
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