The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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illustrates

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of

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in producing

sugar

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canes

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. The

process

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starts with growing

multiples

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sugar

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cane plants and

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goes on to the harvesting

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. To produce

sugar

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, workers need to put

sugar

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canes

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through multiple machining

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process

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, from crushing the stem, to purifying, evaporating, and

seperating

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separating

sugar

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crystal

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crystals

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from the

syrup

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.

in

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the end,

sugar

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can be collected after

drying

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the drying

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and

colling

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process

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. The

process

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starts with workers planting and

nurishing

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nurturing

sugar

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canes

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for 12 to 18 months. After it matures,

sugar

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canes

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go through harvesting

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by the workers either manually or with

specialized

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machines. Before the machining

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,

worker

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workers

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crush the stems in order to

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juice

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that will be used in the next stages.

Sugar

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cane's

juice

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goes

on

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multiple machining

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process

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before forming

sugar

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. In order to purify the

juice

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, the

funnel

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funnels

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are equipped with

limestone

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a limestone

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filter. Pure and clean

sugar

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cane's

juice

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are

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evaporated until it forms a

syrup

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consistency. They use

centrifuge

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a centrifuge

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machine, where it spins the

syrup

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so it

seperates

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separates

sugar

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cystals

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crystals

from

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syrup

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the syrup

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Lastly

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sugar

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crystals are dried and

cool

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before being able to shipped to

customer

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the customer

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as

sugar

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.