IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 6.5

You recently took part in a training course. The organiser of the course has asked you for some feedback. Write a letter to the organiser of the course. In your letter: • give details of the course you took part in • say what you found useful on the course • suggest ways the course could be improved You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear......

Dear Sir, I am writing to share my feedback after recently completing an English course at the "Quo Vadis and English World" language centre, located in the heart of chişinău. I spent two productive weeks there, and I would like to reflect on my experience. In the structure of our lessons, we focused heavily on practising the IELTS. Our teacher provided us with extensive practice, including dialogues and communication.
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 helped us feel more confident in our speaking abilities.
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, the program could be even more effective with a few details.
Firstly
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, adding sessions with native speakers is productive for young students to improve their listening comprehension and natural accent.
Secondly
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, I suggest increasing the number of exam simulations
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 prepare us for the pressure of the real test.
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, the course should be longer to cover all the topics in IELTS. Thank you for your hard work and time for our education

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task response
Your letter tells what the course was, what you found useful, and how to improve. It covers all parts of the task. To raise the score, add a short closing line and a simple sign-off.
coherence and cohesion
The letter has a good flow. Try to keep one main idea in each paragraph and use simple linking words (and, also, then, but) to show how ideas go together.
content
You describe the duration and main activities clearly.
structure
You give clear ideas for improvement in three points.
tone
The tone is polite and respectful.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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