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Writing Samples
Band 6

You have recently learned about an opening for an internship at a local company that you interested in Write a letter Introduce yourself From where you came to know about Describe why you are perfect for this

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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 letter to express my sincere interest in the web developer internship position, which was recently advertised by you. I am currently a third-year Computer Science & Engineering student at Sheridan College, Brampton. I have been living in the city since my birth.
Last
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 week,
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 searching for internship opportunities on
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Indeed
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, I found your listing. I learned that you are seeking a suitable candidate for the position, and I am interested in applying.
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 to my degree, I have completed a diploma and a six-month training course in the same field.
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, I have designed a few websites as part of my projects, which
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 helped me to gain hands-on experience with HTML, Python,
Javascript
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JavaScript
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, and CSS. So, my technical skills
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along
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, along
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 with my enthusiasm for
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learning,
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 will enable me to work effectively within a team environment. I am looking forward to your positive consideration. Yours sincerely, Rupinder Kaur(9068)

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structure
Break longer ideas into short, clear lines. Put one main idea in each paragraph.
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Tie the letter to the job. Say how your skill helps the firm and name a task they do.
grammar
Fix small grammar: cap forms like Indeed and JavaScript; use 'I look forward to hearing from you' for a formal tone.
style
Keep the letter short, and drop extra bits like an ID at the end.
content
Show a small success with numbers, like projects you built or teams you worked with.
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Clear aim is stated at the start.
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Formal tone and closing are good.
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You mention study and work you have done.
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The letter is easy to read and follows a simple flow.
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