You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having the party Give directions on how to get to the venue Suggest how you can accommodate him/her You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Lucy, Hi Lucy! How have you been? I hope you’re doing well. I have some great news to share—I’ve just graduated with a master’s degree from Thammasat University! To celebrate
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, I’m planning to have a party at my house
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weekend, and I’d love you to come. Emma and some of our friends will be there too, so it will be a great chance for us to meet again and have fun together. It’s quite easy to get to my place. You can take the BTS to Bang Wa station, and from there, take a taxi to my house. I’ll send you the exact address once you arrive. Don’t worry about accommodation. I can book a hotel for you, but you’re
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very welcome to stay at my house. We have a spare room, and it would be nice to spend more time catching up since it’s been a
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. Let me know if you can come. I really hope to see you soon! Best wishes, Kann

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For task response: You answered all parts, but the way to your home is a bit short. Add one or two more clear steps.
task response
For task response: The place to stay is clear, but say which choice is better for your friend.
coherence and cohesion
For coherence and cohesion: Your ideas are in a clear order. To make it even better, you can add one more linking word like 'after that' or 'because'.
coherence and cohesion
For coherence and cohesion: The line about the address is a little unclear. You can give the full address in the letter, or say you will meet your friend at the station.
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For task response: You clearly say why you are having the party.
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For task response: You give a kind and friendly way for your friend to stay.
coherence and cohesion
For coherence and cohesion: The letter has a clear start, middle, and end.
coherence and cohesion
For coherence and cohesion: Each paragraph has one main idea, so it is easy to read.
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