The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

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The graph gives an overview of how many
shops
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were established and shut down from 2011 to 2018. In general, there were more
shop
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openings over the period, compared with the closures. In 2011, there were 8,500
shops
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entering the market,
while
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only approximately 6,500
shops
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went bankrupt. In 2012, both groups experienced a considerable fall, before bouncing back in the following year, with the
number
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of
shop
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closures reaching its peak at 7,000. The
number
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of
shops
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that opened continued to grow to 6,000 in 2014,
then
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dropping
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back to 4,000 by 2015.
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, the
number
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of
shops
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that exited the market observed an unexpected plunge, hitting its lowest point at 500 in 2015. In 2016, the
number
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of
shop
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closures surpassed the other group, with the figure of 5,000 and
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off until the end of the period. Meanwhile, after remaining around 4,000 from 2016-2017, the
number
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of
shop
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openings reduced again, falling to 3,000 by 2018.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops, shop, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • decline
  • surge
  • stabilize
  • correlation
  • economic conditions
  • consumer behavior
  • technological advancements
  • urban development
  • employment
  • retail sector
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