The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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The line graph illustrates the
number
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of
tourists
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who visited a Caribbean
island
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between 2010 and 2017. It
also
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shows their accommodation types, including staying on
cruise
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ships and on the
island
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.
Overall
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, the total
number
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of
visitors
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increased gradually from 2010 to 2017,
while
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the types of accommodation used by
tourists
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showed some fluctuations. After 2012, the
number
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of
visitors
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staying on
cruise
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ships increased significantly, and between 2015 and 2016, more
tourists
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stayed on
cruise
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ships than on the
island
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.
Although
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the total
number
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of
visitors
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rose steadily from 1
million
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to 3.5
million
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over seven years, the
number
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of
tourists
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who preferred to stay on the
island
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dipped slightly after 2015. The
island
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had the lowest
number
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of
visitors
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in 2010, which was recorded at 1
million
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. Between 2010 and 2012, the
number
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of
cruise
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ship travellers fluctuated between 0.25
million
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and 0.5
million
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. After 2012,
this
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figure increased gradually,
while
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the
number
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of travellers staying on the
island
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fluctuated between 1
million
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and 1.5
million
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, tourists, island, cruise, visitors, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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