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The Table shows how many international students study in Canada and the United States by country of origin. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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The tables illustrate how many
internatioal
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international
students
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studies
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study
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 in Canada and the
USA
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 by country of origin.
Overall
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, the total
number
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 of
internatioal
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international
students
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study
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studying
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 in Canada and the
USA
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 both show an upward trend over the given frame. Looking at the chart in the
USA
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, it can be seen that the
number
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 of
India's
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Indian
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students
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 stood at 110,000 in 2002, which was the highest figure among the other countries.
Subseqently
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Subsequently
, it decreased by 9% to 182,000 in 2003. Followed by China, it accounted for 110,000 in the initial year, and increased slightly to 116,600
at the end
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 of the
period
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.
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, the total
number
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 rose by 2%, and it
around
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 eight times higher than
Canda
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Canada
 until the end of the
period
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. When it comes to
Canda
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Canada
, the
figure
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number
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 of Chinese
students
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took up
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stood
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 at 5,400 at the start of the
period
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, which was the highest among the other countries. After
the
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one year, it
climb
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climbed
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 dramatically to 7,850. Followed by the
USA
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, it made up 5000 in 2002, and
then
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 increased slightly to 5450
2003
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in 2003
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. Notably, the figure of
the India
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Indian
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students
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 consisting of 2100 at the start of the
period
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, which
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apply
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 was the lowest among the other countries. In
next
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the next
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one
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year, it rose significantly by 35%.
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, the total
number
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 was increased
gradutally
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gradually
 by 17% in 2003.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, usa, number, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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