The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and the amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

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The first line
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illustrates the percentage of households with three electrical appliances,
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the second
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shows the amount of time spent on housework per week between 1920 and 2019.
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it is clear that
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the ownership of all three electrical appliances increased significantly over the period. At the same time, the number of
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spent on housework decreased dramatically. In the first
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, refrigerator ownership increased rapidly from nearly 0% in 1920 to 100% by 1980.
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machine showed a slower increase, rising from 40% to around 74% in 2019.
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, vacuum cleaner ownership rose slightly from 30% to a peak at 100% in 2000. If we look at the second
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, time spent on housework was highest in 1920 at 50
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per week.
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number dropped sharply to 20
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in 1960, before reaching its lowest point at about 11
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in 2019.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words graph, hours with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • housework
  • time frame
  • variables
  • trends
  • significant milestones
  • turning points
  • correlation
  • reduction
  • influenced
  • societal implications
  • quality of life
  • gender roles
  • economic implications
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