The diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates the process of growing and preparing
pineapples
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to make different products.
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it is clear that
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the process consists of two main stages
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a natural growing phase that takes 12 months, followed by a manufacturing phase where the fruit is processed in three different ways. In the first stage, the
pineapples
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require a sunny climate with temperatures between 23 and 30°C.
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pineapple crowns are planted 26cm apart. After 7 months, the plants are sprayed with ethylene, and after another 5 months, the fruits mature to 30cm in height and 2kg in weight.
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all
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are washed. After that, they are processed in three ways. Small
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are peeled and cut to be turned into juice using an extractor. Medium ones are
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peeled and sliced to be put into cans.
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, large
pineapples
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are coated with wax and packed into crates to be exported by ship.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words pineapples with synonyms.
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