The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pie charts indicate the various methods three countries use to deal with dangerous
waste
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. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, burying unsafe refuse underground or burning it are the most common approaches, whilst only the UK applies chemical treatment or dumps it in the sea. Noticeably, Korea and Sweden undertake the exact three procedures when dealing with dangerous
waste
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the figures vary from one country to another,
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Korea relies heavily on recycling (62%),only a quarter of refuse undergoes reprocessing, but when it comes to burying it, Sweden takes the lead by accounting for 55%,
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the approach composes 22% of the Korean chart. Meanwhile, just 9% of Korea's toxic
waste
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is incinerated, and for Sweden,
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share increases to 20%, and it diminishes to 2% for the UK.
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, in the United Kingdom, more than 80% of unsafe
waste
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is buried underground
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, 8% are treated chemically , and 8% are dropped in the sea.

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