The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000.

The graph illustrates the different modes of transport used to travel and work in one European city between 1960, 1980 and 2000, in four different modes of transportation, which are Buses,

Cars

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, Bikes and Feet

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, using

Cars

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has highly increased over the

years

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,

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nevertheless

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, using Feet and Bikes hugelly decreased over the period by around 20%

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, using Buses slightly raise med-period by 5% and

then

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fell

down

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about 7% in 2000, and during that time, using feet was the highest transport mode

making

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, making

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it the dominant choice for transport and travel.

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it decreased over the past

years

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, making

Cars

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take

its

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their

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place, in 1960 and

1980

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1980,

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bike was common

regardless

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. However

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,

It

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it

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fell down be 5% by 20

years

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in

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. In

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1980

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1980,

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cars

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weren’t

the

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apply

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the highest

one

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mode of transportation,

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but it

raises

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rose by 10%

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in 2000 by 10%, making it the most common

transportation

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mode of transportation

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in the

last

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years

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of the period

within

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, within

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