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The chart below shows the percentages of different types of household waste that were recycled in one city between 1992 and 2002.

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This
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 chart illustrates the percentages of
varies
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various
 types
household
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of household
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 waste that were recycled in one city in 1992, 1997 and 2002. In
this
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essay
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essay,
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 we will review the graph. In
1992
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1992,
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 the most recycled material was
can
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cans
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 with 20
percentage
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per cent
.
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contrast
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contrast,
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 in 1997 maximum repossessed material was paper with 39
percentage
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per cent
.
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Furthermore
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 in
2002
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2002,
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this
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 index showed that glass was at the top with 48
percents
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per cent
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.
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Nevertheless
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 in three
years
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years,
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 the plastic was
minimum
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the least
 reused resource. 2002 th
year
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 was the most ecological
year
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,
hence
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 it reused 48
percentage
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per cent
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 of glass, 39
percents
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per cent
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 of paper and 25
percents
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per cent
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 of cans.
At
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In
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 the
graphic
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graphic,
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 2002th
year
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 is
on
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apply
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the peak
point
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year
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 with high levels. And
also
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 reusing glass
increased
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has increased
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among
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over the past
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 10 years.
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Moreover
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 1992 presents the minimum amount
at
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of
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 recycling. In conclusion, we can say that
year
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 by
year
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 recycling has
rose
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risen
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 and improved. It means
town
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the town
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 made
strong
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a strong
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 approach to ecology issues.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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