The bar chart below shows the number of tourists in three nations who travel to Australia in 2005 and 2015. The graph below shows the number of tourists who use two types for holiday.

The

number

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of

tourists

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in three nations who travelled to Australia in 2005 and 2015 has been shown on the bar chart above.

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the

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of

tourists

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who use two types for

holiday

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has been illustrated on the graph above.

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from 2005 to

2015

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2015,

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the

number

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of

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tourists

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had decreased

while

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number

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of

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and

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tourists

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had increased.

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in 2010, there

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a significant break in staying at

resort type of

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resort-type

holiday

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and

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since

2010

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2010,

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it

kept

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has kept

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falling

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whereas

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, whereas

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backpacking

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the backpacking

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category

continuously

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has continuously

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kept increasing

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increased

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since 2005. In 2005, more than 1,400,000

Japanese

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tourists

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had

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apply

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visited Australia

which

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is more than the total

number

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of

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and

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tourists

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which

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were 800,000 and 500,000

respectively

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.

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, considering the graph, about 1,750,000

tourists

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had

preffered

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preferred

staying at a resort

holiday

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while

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less than 500,000

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had preffered backpacking

holiday

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. In ten

years

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British

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and

American

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tourists

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had started to visit Australia,

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there is a

significantdecrease

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significant decrease

in the

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of

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tourists

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which

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was reported to be approximately 600,000.

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, since

2010

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there

is

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a decline (fall/dip) in the

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of

tourists

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who stayed at resort

while

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the

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of

tourists

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who made backpacking travel had been increasing since 2005 and in

2015

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2015,

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there is an

equalization

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for

holiday

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types.

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, the

numbers

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number

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of Britishs were 1,500,000

and

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, and

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Americans

are

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were

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1,500,000

which

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were

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more than the

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of

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tourists

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were

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1,000,000 in 2015. One feature that stands out is the similar

number

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of

British

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and

American

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tourists

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in 2015

which

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, which

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is reported.