The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
THE FLOW CHART ILLUSTRATE THE INFORMATION REAGARDING HOW ETHAANOL FUEL IS PRODUCED FROM CORN.
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, IT CAN BE SEEN THAT
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THERE WERE
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NINE
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OF NINE
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STEPS THROUGH WHICH ETHANOL FUEL WAS PRODUCED.
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, WATER WAS ADDED IN BETWEEN AND SOLID PRODUCTS REMOVED BEFORE TRANSPORTAION , MAKE IT TOTAL ELEVEN STEPS. AFTER
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ANALYISING
THE DIAGRAM, IT IS
ABDUDANTLY
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ABUNDANTLY
CLEAR THAT
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CORN
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FIRSTLY
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IS FIRSTLY
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STORE
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FOR
SOMETIME
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SOME TIME
BEFORE MAKING FUEL . AFTER THAT, IT IS
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TO MILE , WHERE IT IS COOKED FOR FOUR
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HOURS.
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IN BETWEEN, WATER WAS ADDED
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COOKING TO MAKE IT IN A LIQUID FORM.
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, AFTER COOKING NEXT STEP IS FERMENTING THE PRODUCT FOR 48 HOURS.
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SEPARTION SOLID PRODUCTS WAS REMOVED AND
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THE REMAINING
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LIQUID PART
TRANSFER
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WAS TRANSFERRED
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INTO
FUTHER
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FURTHER PROCESSING
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.
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, ETHANOL
EXCRECTED
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IS EXTRACTED
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AND
HOLD
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FOR 5 HOURS FOR PURIFICATION .
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, ETHANOL
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STORE FOR SOMETIME AND
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IN IS TRANSFER TO THE PLACES THROUGH TRANSPORTAION.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ethanol
  • corn
  • harvesting
  • milling
  • cooking
  • fermentation
  • distillation
  • dehydration
  • enzymes
  • fermentable sugars
  • concentration
  • anhydrous ethanol
  • fuel
  • processed
  • mixture
  • yeast
  • carbon dioxide
  • high temperatures
  • surface area
  • separation
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