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The graph below shows the sales of children's books ,adult fiction and education books between 2002 and 2006 in one country.

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The graph below shows the sales of children's books ,adult fiction and education books between 2002 and 2006 in one country.
The graph illustrates how
much
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many
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 kids'
books
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, adult fiction and educational
one
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books
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 were sold from 2002 to 2006 in sole region.
Overall
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, acadimec
books
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sales
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 were the lowest in
the
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apply
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most of
given
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the given
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 years.
While
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 they were the same
sales
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 as adult fiction
books
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 at some point. Unlike younger people's
books
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 were the highest
at the end
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 of the period. First of all, adult fiction
books
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 started
under 50
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with sales under 50 million
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million
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sales
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, in 2003,
they
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and they
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pluged
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plummeted
 significantly to under 40
million
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. After
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year
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a year
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, they rose slightly to exactly 40
million
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. From 2005 to 2006, they decreased considerably to 30
million
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.
Moreover
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, academic
books
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 were at 30
million
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sales
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 in 2002
,
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;
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 in the following
year
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, they rocketed sharply to over 30
million
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. From 2004 to 2005, they went down steadily to over 20
million
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sales
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. In the
last
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 given
year
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, they went up dramatically to over 30
million
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.
Also
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, from 2002 to 2003, younger people's
books
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 had a sharp increase to over 40
million
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,
then
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 they increased gradually to under 50
million
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 until 2005. From
this
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year
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, they rose sharply to under 60
million
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,
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 in 2006.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, sales, million, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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