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You have found an interesting website. Write a letter to your friend to tell about the website. In your letter, you should: •describe what the website is •explain why the website is interesting in •tell how this website will help him/her.

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Dear Jane, I'm writing
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task response
Name the site in the first part and say where your friend can find it. Add one short line about why you think it is good.
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Use a full closing, such as “Best wishes,” and your name, to make the letter feel complete.
coherence and cohesion
Use a few clear link words, such as “First,” “Also,” and “For this reason,” to make the ideas flow more smoothly.
coherence and cohesion
Keep each paragraph on one main point: the site, what it can do, and how it can help your friend.
task response
You cover all the main parts: what the site is, why it is useful, and how it can help Jane study.
coherence and cohesion
Your letter has a clear order. The reader can easily follow the move from the site to its tools and then to its help.
coherence and cohesion
The greeting is friendly, and the tone fits a letter to a friend.
The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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