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The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860, and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860, and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the
changes
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 that took place in a town named Willington in 1780, 1860, and 2000.
This
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 report aims to summarise the key trends, significant comparisons and notable
changes
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 highlighted in the data.
Overall
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, the
area
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 underwent several significant
changes
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. Some existing features were removed or replaced,
while
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 some facilities were added.
In addition
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, the layout of the
area
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 became more modern. Looking first at the eastern part of the
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, some villages were added. The woods were converted into sports
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fields
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 and schools. Another notable trend is that the
bridage
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bridges
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 were built in 1860,
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 the river
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remained in the same location.
Furthermore
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, a road was built in
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2000. Moving to the opposite part of the
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, some shops were added next to the river. The farms were removed. The wetland for birds was built below the bridge in 2000. Another notable change is that the number of homes
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 increased.
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, these
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 made the
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 more developed.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words changes, area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban development
  • rural
  • undeveloped
  • substantially
  • railway line
  • market area
  • extensive urbanization
  • population growth
  • industrial areas
  • shopping centers
  • network of roads
  • public facilities
  • comparison
  • transformation
  • evolution
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