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The table uses four economic indicators to show the standard of living in five selected countries in 1982.

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The table uses four economic indicators to show the standard of living in five selected countries in 1982.
The table uses four economic indicators to show the standard of living in five selected countries in 1982.
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, it can be seen that the
quality
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 of
life
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 in the USA was far higher than
the
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 other four countries.
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, the USA, which is a developed country, had the highest GNP at 13,160 dollars per head. It
also
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 had a much higher daily calorie intake and
life
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 expectancy, and the lowest rate of infant mortality. The other developing countries had
quality
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 of
life
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 ratings that were significantly lower. The range of indicators for Egypt, Indonesia and Bolivia
were
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 similar, with Egypt having the highest
quality
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 of
life
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 amongst the three.
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, the infant mortality rate in
Egypt’s
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Egypt
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 was slightly higher than Indonesia’s at 97 deaths per 1000 compared to 78 in Indonesia. Bangladesh had by far the lowest
quality
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 of
life
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 in all the indicators. Its GNP was one hundred times smaller than the USA’s. Its calorie intake and
life
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 expectancy were about half those of the USA, and its infant mortality rate was 10 times greater.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words quality, life with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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