IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Nowadays people are living in modern era and they want to live a luxurious life. Government of every country want to make their country beautiful, so after some period of time, some countries prefer to renovate old buildings and some evacuate old building and built new modern buildings. I am agree with this statement and will discuss my view:
Given the power and influence of the super rich, it might seem as if social status and material possessions are the new symbols of personal worth, but in everyday life I do not think this is true.
According to some people, the role of a father in bringing up a child is as important as that of a mother and hence fatherhood must be lauded as much as motherhood. I fully agree with this view. Of course, the mother has a greater role than the father in bringing the child into this world, but once the baby is born both parents play an equal role in raising him.
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