IELTS Writing Samples of Band 6.5

With increasing population and even growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?

The deforestation of high populated cities represents a great threat to life. While some argue that progress is more important than nature, scientists and researchers have shown that natural habitats are essential to the planet's ecosystem and therefore to the people. Considering both sides of the discussion this essay will discuss the importance of Nature in urban centres and how the problem of deforestation in those can be solved....

Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements. What measures can be taken to protect them?

The aim of advertisements is to show what is necessary to buy and to create variety with new products. In daily life, we have seen many of it which affect our minds. In recent years, advertisements have shown us via social media so shall we restrict it or how can we utilize it without affected by it?...

The government should lower the budget on the arts in order to allocate more money to education.To what extent do you agree

It is often argued that governments should focus on improving schools and curriculums, leaving out arts. I strongly disagree with the previous statement, as I firmly believe that art education is as crucial as teaching scientific and theoretical subjects....

Governments should spend more money on education than on recreation and sports. Do you agree or disagree?

Many believe that allocating resources for education should be prioritized by the government over funding for sports and recreational activities. This is because education will be of benefit to a nation in the long run while sports and leisure activities will be advantageous to a small number of people. In my opinion, I agree that the government should focus its allocation on educational purposes rather than on extracurriculars. I will discuss the reasons in detail in the following essay....

Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

Nowadays being a good parent is not something easy, all kids look at their parents as superheroes, role models or saviours, and they keep dreaming to be like them one day. Few individuals feel it would be a great idea for schools to teach young people how to be a good parent. I completely agree that it will be nice initiatives for schools to learn every youth how to be a good parent in future. In this essay, I will further explain the reason and give my opinion accordingly....

In many city, planner tend to arrange shops schools, officies and homes in a specific area and separated them each other. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh disadvantages.

There are some architects in urban areas who tries to organise commercial building, stores, education institute and residential areas set up separately at different locations. This essay will not only discuss its minor benefits but also a few drawbacks will be highlighted....

All over the world , societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?

Nowadays, obesity has become a really serious problem, that could lead to a huge amount of work that many people currently have and therefore, a lack of free time. In this essay,I will further discuss the reasons that obesity is bringing and also how we could tackle this awful problem....

Many people nowadays travel abroad for their university education. Why do people do this? Would you consider doing this yourself and why? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

The search for a good education has led students from underdeveloped countries to travel far away from their hometowns. The motivation for those students to move to 'first-world' countries such as the USA and UK is to enrol in renowned colleges with a higher degree of education. As an international student myself, I not only consider travelling abroad for education but I would also recommend it because students can have a better education and more opportunities in life....

Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that parents of children who attend private schools should not need to contribute to state schools through taxes. Personally, I completely disagree with this view....

Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many parents choose to teach their children at home so that they can control learning outcomes. Others disagree with the approach as they believe kids should be sent to school in order to receive a better education. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and provide the reason why I think teaching children at home may be a better approach....

Leaders and directors in an organization are normally older people. Some people think younger leader would be better. Do you agree or disagree?

As in many other things in life, it could be quite misleading to generalize opinions. Labelling things in a binary, polarized way could be in some situations even dangerous. So I'll try to approach this question through a non-biased lens, looking at both advantages and disadvantages of leaders being seniors and juniors....

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree disagree with this statement?

It is anticipated that in the forthcoming years, no one ought to subscribe to newspapers nor shall purchase books due to the free access of the newspapers on the internet and the e-books. To a major extent,I differ with the viewpoint. My preference is justified further in the ensuing paragraphs....

Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people using their cars?

Over the past 30 years, more families bought not only one private car, which caused car ownership to increase dramatically, thus resulting in 'one big traffic jam' in many cities. I think it is exactly a real issue in modern days. Governments should take measures to deal with it. I will give some methods below which I believe are useful....

People think that the government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.

Nowadays, people suggest that the government authorities should increase the price of fuel in order to contribute to environmental health. In my opinion, that point of view will bring broader problems with it. There are many other cautious acts can be done in other to maintain a healthy planet....

There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

In this day and age, music is varied in many different types. There are several factors responsible for the human need for music and a country's traditional melody and global music are equally important....

Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

As more and more organizations and institutes establish themselves in cities, talent from rural areas is drawn towards it. While this 'Brain Drain' does negatively impact the development of non-metropolitan regions, it's advantages towards the economy of a nation are far more pronounced....

It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Many people believed that children should be taught about right and wrong at an early age and a punishment is required in some cases to complete this education. I agree with this idea to some extent that some punishment is important for the betterment of the children but it can be ineffective....

Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The environment issue is extremely crucial for modern society as well as the question of what will be left for future generations? Unfortunately, the majority of the world population believe that only government and large companies have enough resources to change the situation....

Some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health issues as a result of eating too much fast food. Hence, the government must impose an extra tax on this kind of food. Do you agree or disagree?

It is generally noticed that in a few countries an increasing number of public are affected by health problems because of having too much fast food. Hence, there are diverse opinions of people concerned with the above issue. A plethora of people opines that the government must charge an additional tax on such kind of food. I profoundly disagree with this statement....

Some people think that government should give high salary to the celebrities but others think that it should be provided to doctors and teachers discuss both views and give ur views

It has become the moot issue whether the regime should be paid handsome remuneration to the famous personalities or it should be given to social workers such as doctors and teachers. However, distinct masses have a distinctive mindset. I accord myself to the later statement that medical personnel and professors deserved the enormous amount considering their respective work. The upcoming paragraphs will shed the lights on both views....