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some people feel that entertainers (e. g film stars, pop musicians, sports stars) are paid too much money. do you agree or disagree? which other types of job should be highly paid?

Today, many individuals regard that performers such as film stars, pop musicians or sport stars get highly salary. I completely agree with this statement, because in the world there are a lot of essential jobs which should be paid greatly than these and why I make clear below.

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some people feel that entertainers (e. g film stars, pop musicians, sports stars) are paid too much money. do you agree or disagree? which other types of job should be highly paid?

It is often said that public persons earn a lot of money and at the same time there are many jobs who are not so well paid despite that are very important for our society.From my point of view I think we have to maintain a balance and do not forget to invest in others activities who are important too.

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