some people feel that entertainers (e. g film stars, pop musicians, sports stars) are paid too much money. do you agree or disagree? which other types of job should be highly paid?

Today, many individuals regard that performers

such

as film stars, pop musicians or sport stars get

highly

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high

higher

highest

salary. I completely agree with

this

statement, because in the

world there

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world, there

are a lot of essential jobs which should be paid greatly than these and why I make clear below. One of the vital specialists in the

world

are teachers. Because everybody knows that without

teachers none

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teachers, none

can be educated in

this

world

.

For instance

, professionals

such

kinds of subjects as math, literature, history and foreign languages are really needed in our society.

Although

, nowadays in schools there have several problems and complaints directed to teachers that they don’t pay attention to children and quality of studying is not as good as,

however

it

also

depends on pupils and their

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

. After

this

parents try to find high-quality tutors from training

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

for their kids, but trainers

also

are teachers.

Therefore

, educators should be well-paid.

Additionally

, without any doubts medicine professors and nurses are really important in our life. Because every humankind in their life will undergo some kind of diseases and evidently in

this

moment only doctors can assist them. For case, recently COVID-19 has spread widely and extremely contagiously throughout the

world

.

As a result

of

this

a large number of people died and most of humans are still sick and kept in isolation.

Moreover

, many medical doctors and nurses take care of them day and night without thinking about their lives, their health

also

without rest and are heroes in our lives. So, they

are absolutely deserve

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absolutely deserve

are absolutely deserving

are absolutely deserved

have absolutely deserved

a large number of

payment

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payments

. In conclusion,

this

is why the state should spend a large amount of money on entertainers when there are

such

important and necessary people. In my opinion, I think that we can live without musicians or pop

stars but

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stars, but

we cannot live with

educationalists

and medicine specialists. (310 words)