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Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in childern. While other people think it is the fault of the parents. Discuss both side an give your opinion

I strongly agreed with second options. Actually it is really apparently question. But, I would l like try to explain for my personal view. We are living in high-devolvment, modern society era. This time is very different

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Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in childern. While other people think it is the fault of the parents. Discuss both side an give your opinion

Nowadays, a large number of children are overweight or in the worst case, obese. Some people believe that this is a government responsibility while others argue that it is their parents' fault.

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Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity in childern. While other people think it is the fault of the parents. Discuss both side an give your opinion

Some people think that the government is responsible for the rise in obesity among children. At the same ,time some people think it is the mistake of the parents. In my point of ,view there are some faults on both sides

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